Reflection 4.2

This was the best experience I have had in revision throughout this entire semester. The peer revision really helped so much. The criticism became much more than words on a paper. Hearing what my peers had to say about my work was really helpful. This topic is so important to me so I'm glad that this was the essay I got workshopped. I am really proud of my final draft. This revision in particular showed me the importance of making first drafts separate from final drafts because my paper really has become so much better since revising it. I hope that I took my peer criticism and applied it to my paper efficiently because I got really helpful comments. This was probably my favorite essay to write because it covered a topic that is so prevalent in my life and being able to share that with my peers and hearing what they have to say is really great.